高考英語滿分作文名師點評與評析
看高考的英語作文有許多考生得到了滿分，這是爲什麼呢?下面是本站小編給大家整理的高考英語滿分作文名師點評，供大家參閱!
【試題回放】
假定你是李華，正是英國牛津參加短期語言培訓，計劃星期天去倫敦旅遊。互聯網上一則廣告引起了你的注意，但一些具體信息不明確(箭頭所指內容)。請給該旅行社發一封電子郵件，詢問有關情況。
注意：
1.詞數100左右，信的格式已爲你寫好。
2.可根據內容要點適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
3.參考詞彙：牛津——Oxford 費用——fee
Dear Sir/Madame,
I’m writing for More information about the day tour to London.
As a student at Oxford University, I’d like to know if you have any speciAl price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food?
How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day, I’d like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.
Yours,
Li Hua
[名師點評]
本文是根據畫面的提示來寫一封電子郵件。作者在文章中首先把握了全部的要點，敘述較爲完整;其次，作者運用一些過渡句和銜接詞將文章串聯，意思連貫。文章中採用了第一人稱和一般現在時，這是值得肯定的地方。
四川高考英語滿分作文名師點評【全國卷Ⅲ】(四川、雲南、陝西等地區用)
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假設你是李華，最近國內一家英文報紙正在討論北京動物園是否應遷出市區。以下是你所在班級討論的情況。請你給該報寫一封信，反映討論結果。
贊成遷出：反對遷出：
1.遊客多，交通堵塞
2.郊區環境好
1.建於1906年，中外聞名
2.搬遷易造成動物死亡
注意：
1.詞數100字左右，信的開頭已爲你寫好。
2.可根據內容要點適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
3.參考詞彙： 郊區—suburb
Dear Editor ,
Recently ,in our class there has been a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city . Some of my classmates are in favor of the move say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams also say that once moved ,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs ver ,other students are against the idea ,saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906 ,has a history of 100 years ,and is well –known at home and abroad it should remain where it is ’s more ,moving may cause the death of some animals move or not ,this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
[名師點評]
這篇文章寫得還是比較精彩的。要點表達得完整而準確，清楚展示了主題。先提出了文章的主題，進而列出了贊成的觀點及其相關的理由，同時在其後又給出了反面的觀點，論據十分充足。文章結構嚴謹，前後連貫。
全國II高考英語滿分作文名師點評【試題回放】
一家賓館新開業，爲吸引外國賓客，希望在互聯網上進行宣傳。請你用英語爲其 寫一篇文字介紹。主要內容包括：
1.地點：距白山入口處500米;
2.房間及價格：單人間(共20間)，100元/天;雙人間(共15間)，150元/天;熱水淋浴;3.餐飲：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免費開放; 5.歡迎預定。
注意：1.詞數100左右，開頭語已爲你寫好;2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!
Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.
500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!
Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.
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本文開門見山，首先點明瞭主旨。本文最大的特點是應用了很多比較複雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。開頭使用了獨立結構交代賓館位置。which引導的非限制性定語從句的使用也很正確。總地來說，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯的滿分作文。
積累卡片英漢互譯
好詞1. provide v.提供2. convenience n.便利
好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are
very enjoyable.所有這些服務都會給你帶來便利，並且非常的愉快。
評析：bring great convenience，帶來便利。
