2017高考英語作文點評解析
高考中的英語作文之所以能夠得到滿分是爲了什麼?它們有什麼出色的地方?下面是本站小編給大家整理的2017高考英語作文點評解析，供大家參閱!
假定你是李華，正在英國接受英語培訓，住在一戶英國人家裏。今天你的房東Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你準備外出，請給Mrs. Wilson 寫一留言條，內容包括：
1.外出購物
2.替房東還書
y 來電話留言：1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)見面取消
2)此事已告知Susan
3) 儘快回電
注意：
1. 詞數100左右;
2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Mrs. Wilson,
I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy cAlled, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.
Yours,
Li Hua
[名師點評]
本文屬於提綱式要點作文，是學生比較熟悉的題材，體現了英語學習應該注意實用性，生活型的原則。行文人稱、時態運用恰當、準確，各個要點間邏輯連貫，行文通順。提綱類書面表達不是簡單的逐條翻譯，而是將所給的幾個要點合理的組成比較通順的語句，因此要仔細組織語言，合理安排結構。在語言方面，要特別注意簡潔明瞭，開頭要開門見山。
2017高考英語作文點評解析2假定你是李華，亞洲冬季運動會將在你居住的地方舉辦，現正在招募志願者，你希望成爲其中一員。請按要求用英文給組委會寫一封信。內容應包括：1.個人情況：年齡，性別，學歷 2.個人條件：英語好，愛好體育，善於交際，樂於助人，熟悉本地情況 3.承諾：提供最佳服務
注意：詞數100左右，開頭語已爲你寫好;可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫;生詞：申請—apply (v. ), application (n.)，志願者—volunteer
Dear Sir / Madam:
I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be chosen to be one.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
[名師點評]
這篇文章寫得非常流暢，把握了所有要點，同時以“我”爲中心，詳細說明了自己對志願者工作的結合，以此來表達自己的決心。由於用詞恰當，這種表現就比較充分，具備一定的說服力。詞彙和語句的運用也不錯。
2017高考英語作文點評解析3假設你是李華，你的英國筆友Bob將於九月到你所在城市的建新華文學校學中文，來信請你在學校附近爲他找一套住房。請根據圖畫提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，並告知住房面積爲25平方米，月租500元。
注意：
1.詞數：100左右：
2.參考詞彙：房租—Tent(n.).
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours, Li Hua
滿分理由
本文格式正確，意思表述完整，行文流暢自然。作者在寫作過程中注意長短句並用，還使用了以'which，’引導的非限定性定語從句，從而使文章層次分明，富於變化，不愧爲考場佳作。
