2020年1月11日託福綜合寫作機經真題回憶與範文解析

1月11日的托福考試結束後，關於託福綜合寫作部分的機經，大家也比較關心。畢竟這部分真題題目的練習，對於大家接下來的備考有很大的影響。具體的本次考試題目以及對應的答題思路、滿分範文到底是什麼呢?下面小編爲大家整理了詳細的內容，供大家參考!

2020年1月11日託福綜合寫作機經真題回憶與範文解析

話題分類

生命科學類

考題回憶

1-總論點

三種阻止蝙蝠受到wind turbines傷害的方法。

2-閱讀部分

論點1：不把wind turbines建在蝙蝠活動的地方

論點2：wind turbines晚上不運行

論點3：製造蝙蝠不喜歡的雷達不讓蝙蝠靠近

3-聽力部分

反駁1：蝙蝠活動的地方就不能得到足夠的energy

反駁2：蝙蝠可能會再wind turbines上休息，早上開啓是也會傷寒蝙蝠

反駁3：雷達會影響蝙蝠的繁殖系統

解題思路

此題是典型的聽力反駁閱讀的題型。文章中需要表明聽力完全反駁閱讀，並寫清聽力中出現的細節即可。

參考範文

The reading passage explores the issue that there are three ways to prevent bats from being harmed by wind turbines. The professor in the lecture, however, opposes those methods by providing three specific points.

First, the reading passage suggests that wind turbines can be constructed in the area where bats seldom live or forage, so that the harm caused by wind turbines can be decreased. Although the professor in the lecture admits that the first method is beneficial to bats, the area with frequent appearance of bats can not be powered by the wind turbines, which is inconvenient to people living in the same area. Therefore, the professor's argument disproves its counterpart in the reading.

Moreover, the writer states that we can turn off the wind turbines to avoid the harm towards bats. However, the professor contends that bats still can be hurt by the turbines in the morning, because if the turbines are turned off, bats tent to take a rest on the them.

Finally, the writer asserts that wind turbines can be facilitated radar which emits special range of sound waves to irritate bats, in which keeps bats away from those turbines. By contrast, the professor provides that the certain sound waves are bad for bats’ reproductive systems, so that the third method can cause more damage to bats species.

　　託福獨立寫作中的常用句型總結

一、提出背景的句式

It’s generally agreed that ... ... (人們普遍認爲... ...)

There is a growing body of opinion that ... ... (越來越多的人認爲... ...)

An increasing number of people have the tendency to believe that ... ... (越來越多的人傾向於認爲... ...)

Some people, especially the old, believe that ... ... (一些人，尤其是老人，認爲... ...)

Other people, the young in particular, argue that ... ... (別的人，尤其是年輕人，認爲... ...)

Some current analyses conclude that ... ... (當下的一些分析表明... ...)

... ... is a heated topic in our times. (... ...是我們這個時代火熱的一個話題)

The topic about ... ... has been raging for decades. (關於... ...的話題已經風行幾十年了)

... ... is an eternal/a perpetual topic in our daily lives. (... ...是我們日常生活中一個永恆的話題)

... ... is one of the most talked about topics in the contemporary society. (... ...是當代社會討論最多的話題之一)

Recently, the impact that ... ... has had on our daily lives, in general, is huge and undeniable. (近年來， ... ...對我們日常生活的影響，總的來說，是巨大且不可避免的)

With the gradual perfection and progressive amelioration of ... ..., sweeping changes have been brought into our lives. (隨着... ...的不斷完善和進一步提高，人們的生活發生了翻天覆地的變化)

In terms of ... ..., sometimes we find ourselves in dilemmas. (談到... ...時，我們有時候會發現自己左右爲難)

二、個人觀點的句式

I am totally convinced that ... ... (我百分百確信... ...)

I personally tend to believe that ... ... (我個人傾向於認爲... ...)

From my perspective, ... ... is without doubt a better option. (依我看，... ...毫無疑問是個更好的選擇)

According to the evidence offered above, I can hardly agree that ... ... (綜合以上證明，我很難同意... ...)

With respect to ... ..., I am pretty sure that I’m on the same/opposite side of it. (關於... ...，我很確定是站在正/反方的立場)

Although it’s no simple task for us to make a prudent and satisfying choice, I still wholeheartedly believe that ... ... (儘管對於我們來說，做一個謹慎友令人滿意的選擇是很困難的，但是我仍然全心全意地相信... ...)

三、引出爭議的句式

There is no consensus on . (關於是否該... ...，現在仍然沒有一個定論)

an issue open to debate. (是否該... ...，這是一個有待討論的問題)

a boon or bane is still open to debate. (... ...是好是壞/是對是錯，這有待討論)

The issue of whether…has triggered intense debate. (是否該... ...，這個問題引發了一個激烈的討論)

The debate over been going on for a long time. (關於... ...的討論已經持續很長時間了)

When it comes to ... ..., people tend to hold different viewpoints. (當談到... ...的時候，人們傾向於持有不同的觀點)

Most of the public tend to advocate that ... ... ,while I doubt whether the argument needs more analyses. (大多數人傾向於主張... ..., 但是我認爲這有待進一步討論)

　　託福寫作備考之如何減少扣分點

託福寫作作爲輸出型的考試形式，一直是考生最難得分的部分，考生總是感覺無話可說，無從下筆。本文通過託福作文清晰的結構安排和自查兩方面，幫你有效的降低託福寫作的扣分點，趕緊來看看吧!

大家都知道，在托福考試中，寫作是一種偏主觀輸出的考試形式，與客觀題相比，想要提高這部分的分數，我們除了平時認真備考，不斷擴展思路和積累表達之外，在考試過程中還要儘量避免不必要的失分。其實很多同學都問過這樣的問題：老師，我現在句子表達能力基本就是這個樣子了，馬上要考試，考試中有沒有需要注意的細節，在我現有的水平上，儘量讓自己的文章得分更高一點呢?其實是有的，那今天我們就分享一下如何在託福寫作中減少扣分點，趕快來看看吧!

建立清晰的框架

寫作不僅考查語言的表達，還考查思路的表達，新託福評分標準中就有這樣一項：well organized and well developed。所以在寫作中，給考官展現自己清楚的文章思路是很重要的，不管內容表達如何，我們首先要做到的就是框架清晰。

區分段落是最簡單直接的方法。看到這裏，可能有人會覺得好笑，但是真的是有學生考試一着急，加上時間緊，就忘記了分段，所以我們這裏還要再強調一下。一般，綜合寫作建議分爲四個自然段：第一段總述聽力和閱讀中的觀點，後面三個自然段分點具體闡述(一個論點一個自然段，一般綜合寫作都會給出三方面的具體內容)。不建議只分兩個自然段：一段總述，一段分析。因爲分析部分還是需要清楚地告訴閱卷人，文章和聽力總共表述了幾層意思。如果都寫在一些，容易給閱卷人造成漏點的假象。獨立寫作建議分爲五個自然段：第一段引出論題，闡述自己的觀點，中間三個自然段分三個方面闡述自己的理由，最後一個自然段進行總結。(如果只想到了兩點原因，也可以寫四個自然段，但是需要達到字數要求)

每一自然段的內容闡述建議按照以下順序表達：主要觀點 —— 具體闡述 —— 舉例說明。我們在表達英文時，一定要記住，寫每一個自然段的時候，都要首先提出主要觀點。因爲中英文表達邏輯不一樣，中文習慣鋪墊，我們寫中文文章時，很喜歡在前面鋪墊抒情，寫了半天還不見主要觀點，這是一種意境。但是在外國人的思想中，他們更喜歡直截了當的表達，所以每段第一句話，先把觀點給他們，接下去再進行具體的闡述，這樣閱卷人就會比較清楚地 get 到你想要表達的意思了。

寫完文章要自查

在考試的過程中，文章寫完之後還需要留出 2-3 分鐘的時間進行自查，這一步也很重要的。因爲是機考，我們需要把內容敲在屏幕上，所以在寫作過程中，就避免不了會出現一些比較低級的錯誤，比如拼寫，如果錯誤較多，就算文章寫得不錯，也會影響到閱卷人的心情，自然，分數也就達不到預期的效果。總的來看，大家經常會出現以下幾種錯誤，我們總結一下，以便大家自查。

拼寫錯誤

在考試中，考生會遇到兩種情況：一種是打字的誤打，另一種是對單詞本身 記憶的錯誤，因此不僅需要考生在平時的備考過程中多多進行上機練習，熟悉用鍵盤打字，還要求考生在平時注意背單詞的精確性。

時態錯誤

託福寫作除了拿過去事件作爲例子用過去時態之外，一般使用現在時態，所以大家在檢查的時候需要注意時態的運用，千萬不能各種時態混用。

詞性錯誤

英文中，每種詞性都有具體的用法，最常見的詞性錯誤是形容詞和副詞的混用，檢查時需要重點關注一下。

句子表達是否完整

受中文影響，很多同學在英語寫作中經常會出現一些表達不完整或者特別中式的句子。在寫英語句子時，我們一定要遵循五大句型的句子結構，然後再將修飾成分填充進去，切記簡單粗暴的詞詞對應。另外這裏還需要強調一點，考生不能爲了追求句子表達所謂的“高大上”去亂用句子，正所謂用錯還不如不用。

　　託福寫作範文：探索太空是否是資源浪費

獨立寫作題目

Independent Writing:

It is a waste of time to spend funds on space travel or space exploration.

Nowadays, an increasing number of citizens are discussing the recent launch of ShenZhou carrier rocket. While there are some people who claim that this kind of launch is a waste of money or time because it could not bring any benefits for citizens, I hold a different opinion. From my perspective, space exploration is necessary.

Admittedly, space travel or space exploration would waste a large sum of money. By spending much money on doing research regarding outer space life, government loses their focus on civil life where many people are suffering from starvation, air pollution and epidemics. Under this circumstance, there is no doubt that people would complain about government’s aloft behaviors. However,if viewing from a different angle, space exploration is a long time investment. Never should we expect the journey would bring immediate economic returns to the country. In this case, space travel and space exploration is quite helpful for the country.

To begin with, space exploration might bring benefits for us to search for new energy resource. That is to say, other planets may be rich in certain kinds of resources that are in great shortage on the earth. According to the report released after the exploration to the Mars, the officials from NASA confirms that Mars contains a great volume of natural gas and iron. Moreover, engineers have also noticed that these resources on the planet are able to explore, and if they could solve the problem of long time transportation, these resources could be used on the earth. Consequently, the use of natural gas will not consume burning of petroleum and make our planet a better place to live in.

In addition, space exploration aims to improve level of technology. In other words, it is the development of advanced technology that makes it possible to explore the outer space. It is usually the case that without the technology of launching satellite into the space, it is impossible for people to conduct research. As a result, scientists have to improved their knowledge in related areas so that they could guarantee the launch of these rockets, as well as satellites. Meanwhile, to ensure astronauts’ safety in the outer space, scientists have to repeated work on their suits in order to keep astronauts away from radioactivity. Also, to fill with enough oxygen, scientists have to run encapsulation tests again and again. Only if these equipment are guaranteed can astronauts be safely working in the outer space.

To sum up, the seemly useless space exploration would cost a large sum of money; however, this space activity could still bring benefits in both new energy searching and technology improvement.