託福寫作：實例解析如何擴展論點

託福寫作的重點在於論點，這是在一篇作文之前就需要想好的。想要寫出一篇理想的託福 寫作文章，則選擇一個好的論點，以及明確的表達是十分重要的。下面小編給大家帶來託福寫作：實例解析如何擴展論點。

託福寫作：實例解析如何擴展論點

爲自己的作文找出合理的託福寫作論點，切忌就事論事，其實只要我們大膽的進行舉例，然後需要的時候，再適當提煉，其實寫作思路是非常好尋找的。就像給姑娘寫情書的時候，你也不能只寫我愛你，還一定要寫“不看你的眼，不看你的眉，看的時候心裏跳，看過以後眼淚垂，不看你的眼，不看你的眉，不看你也愛上你，忘了我是誰” 這裏的眼與眉不都是舉例麼。

所謂細化，就是不要拘泥於單純的題目。一定要進行舉例!比如說：2012年02月11日獨立作文題目(更正版本)：Do you agree or disagree the following statement ： Leadership comes naturally： one cannot learn to be a leader。與2012年02月05日中國大陸獨立作文題目：Some people have ambitious dreams and keep following them，but other people always focus on realistic goals and try to achieve them. Which do you think is better?

第一個題目，大家都覺得很空，“領導力”到底該怎麼找理由，完全沒有頭緒。第二個題目，也是一樣的，“具有挑戰性的夢想”與“現實的目標”感覺遠不如老託福裏面的“是否建立工廠”好想理由。

但是如果我們對於領導力進行舉例，我們自然而然的就會想到喬布斯，絕對是一個超偉大的大企業家，喬布斯有什麼過人的能力呢。

1.創新能力，否則不會有iphone與ipad;

2.審美能力，否則Mac的字體不會那麼漂亮，iphone也不會那麼完美;

3.堅韌不拔的能力，否則也不會建立皮克斯東山再起。

再來想創新能力，我們可以通過旅遊來獲得，什麼可以通過學習來獲得，堅韌可以通過體育來獲得。到這，不也就找到了寫作的方向了麼。

　　託福寫作如何瞭解英文思維的句法結構

對很多中國托福考生來說，寫作實際上是個翻譯過程，如何把思想中的中文轉化成現實中的英文是託福基礎寫作最關心的問題，也是學生們首要應該解決的問題。學生們只有把高質量的基礎磚瓦填充到精心設計的邏輯框架中，才能搭建成最終的託福高分作文。

例如，在託福寫作的過程中，托福考生們經常會在腦中形成這樣的句式：“大多數人認爲父母是孩子最好的老師”。當把這樣的句式轉化爲英文時，多數托福考生們會機械地翻譯成：Most people think parents are the best teachers for the children.

從語法角度來看，這個翻譯並沒什麼錯誤。但是這個句子的質量並不能達到托福考試的要求，因爲這只是一個主+謂+賓語從句的簡單結構。背過所謂模板句式的考生可能把上述的句式翻譯爲：Most people hold the view that parents are the best teachers for their children. 這麼寫的目的是什麼?即經過基礎的寫作訓練後，同學們就會了解這是一個主+謂+賓+同位語從句的表達。知其所以然以後，再也不用背所謂的模板，托福考生們也能寫出相對複雜的句式了，從而提高了句子的質量。

當然，僅這一步的提升還不夠，經過託福基礎寫作學習，學生們會認識到，以上兩種英文表達都不是最好的，因爲它們都不太符合英文的表達習慣。真正能夠有力地表達觀點或陳述事實的英文應該是：It is widely accepted that parents are the best teachers for their children.

對於要出國的學生來說，英文寫作的學習絕不只是爲了托福考試，更重要的是爲日後在國外的學習打下夯實的基礎。所以應付考試的模板只能滿足一時之需，而真正瞭解英文的句法結構和思維纔是真正的一勞永逸。

I prefer studying alone. When I’m with other people, I want to play, I don’t want to work.

　　託福寫作中的七大語法規範

語法規範

1. 不完整的句子

(1) If you find that writing is hard is because it is hard. One of the hardest things that people do.

If you find that writing is hard is because it is hard—one of the hardest things that people do.

(2) Stereotypes are a kind of gossip about the world. A gossip that makes us prejudge people before we ever lay eyes on them.

Stereotypes are a kind of gossip about the world, a gossip that makes us prejudge people before we ever lay eyes on them.

Stereotypes are a kind of gossip about the world that makes us prejudge people before we ever lay eyes on them.

2. 分詞短語作狀語的錯誤

Holding her in his arms, the moon hid behind the cloud.

As soon as the moon hid behind the cloud, he held her in his arms.

3. 修飾詞錯位

(1) Romeo received word that Juliet was dead from another messenger.

Romeo received word from another messenger that Juliet was dead.

(2) After leaving the stage, the audience’s applause called the musicians back for an encore.

After the musicians left the stage, the audience’s applause called them back for an encore.

(3) Disruptive in the classroom, a teacher may become exasperated with hyperactive children.

Disruptive in the classroom, hyperactive children may exasperate a teacher.

4. 串句

Unproductive or uncooperative workers can seriously harm an organization, for this reason, employers need to have accurate information about employee performance, but when employees have full access to their own personnel files, co-workers and even supervisors will often find it difficult to give frank criticism of underachievers or to report troublemakers.

Unproductive or uncooperative workers can seriously harm an organization; for this reason, employers need to have accurate information about employee performance. But when employees have full access to their own personnel files, co-workers and even supervisors will often find it difficult to give frank criticism of underachievers or to report troublemakers.

5. 時態錯誤

The researchers admitted that they falsified crucial data in the study.

The researchers admitted that they had falsified crucial data in the study.

6. 代詞錯誤

(1) Too often people either keep their feelings to themselves or take it our on others.

Too often people either keep their feelings to themselves or take them our on others.

(2) Each girl and boy must do their part to keep the home fires burning.

Each girl and boy must do her or his part to keep the home fires burning.

(3) This college has their own entrance requirements.

This college has its own entrance requirements.

(4) If one wishes to participate in the political process, you can begin by voting regularly.

If one wishes to participate in the political process, one can begin by voting regularly.

(5) The fire in the library was finally put out. For a while, they thought an unhappy employee might have started it.

The fire in the library was finally put out. For a while, the library staff thought an unhappy employee might have started it.

7. 結構混亂

Because Hemingway’s style is simple makes his writing accessible to all readers.

Because Hemingway’s style is simple, his writing is accessible to all readers.

Hemingway’s simple style makes his writing accessible to all readers.

　　託福範文：在都市生活的優點

【題目】

Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

【範文】The Advantages of City Life

There are undeniable advantages to both life in a big city and in a small town. The former offers more excitement and convenience while the latter offers a cleaner, quieter and often friendlier place to live. However, despite the advantages of small town life, I prefer to live in a big city for several reasons.

First, life in the city is more convenient. More goods are available and stores are open later. Also, there is better public transportation so it is easier to get around. I can find almost anything I want easily in the city. Second, there are more ways to spend leisure time in the city. There are many places I can go to meet friends and have fun. Finally, and most importantly, the city offers more educational and career opportunities. The city often attracts the best teachers and the best companies. There is also a wider choice of jobs so it is easier to move up the career ladder.

For all of these reasons, I prefer to live in the city. Although I sometimes miss the fresh air and quiet life of a small town, nothing can make up for the opportunities that the city offers me. If one wants to be successful, I believe the best place to live is the city.

【譯文】都市生活的優點

在大都市和在小城鎮生活各有優點，這是不可否認的。前者提供給人們比較多的樂趣及便利，而後者則提供給人們一個比較乾淨、安靜，而且通常更親切的居住場所。然而，儘管小鎮生活有這些優點，但基於某些理由，我還是比較喜歡住在大都市裏。

首先，都市生活比較方便，可以買到比較多的商品，而且商店營業時間比較晚。此外，都市裏有較好的公共運輸工具，到哪裏都比較容易。在都市裏，我幾乎可以輕易地找到任何我想要的東西。其次，在都市裏有更多的方式消磨休閒時間。有很多地方可以讓我去認識朋友，並且玩得很開心。最後，也是最重要的一點是，都市提供更多教育及就業的機會。都市往往能吸引最好的老師以及最好的公司。因爲工作機會比較廣泛，所以要升遷也比較容易。

基於上述種.種理由，我比較喜歡住在都市。雖然有時候我會想念小鎮新鮮的空氣及安靜的生活，但沒有什麼可以彌補都市提供給我的機會。如果想要成功，我認爲最好的居住地點就是都市。