2017年12月英語四級作文答案：試卷三師生關係（文都教育版）

Boundaries exist in virtually all human relationships, and students-teacher relationships are no exception to this rule. This reality gives rise to the following question: what kind of boundaries can be deemed appropriate in an academic setting ?My opinion is that, in general, a relatively formal distance should be kept between professors and their students. 
 

One reason to maintain a formal distance between students and teachers is to highlight the instructor’s role as an authority figure. This is important so that the professors can enforce discipline, have instructions followed, and command respect from students.

Another reason why teachers should maintain a formal students with their students is to avoid real and perceived bias. If the teacher develops close relationships with the students, it may be difficult to completely eliminate bias. Even the impression of bias may cause some students to feel that they have been treated unfairly. 
In sum, maintaining a formal distance between teachers and students can ensure an atmosphere of authority in the classroom and avoid both real and perceived bias.

【參考譯文】
幾乎所有人類關係中都存在着界限，師生關係也不例外。鑑於此，下面的問題就出現了，在學術的分爲中什麼樣的界限是合適的？我的觀點是：一般而言，師生之間應該保持一種比較正式的距離。
師生之間保持一種正式的距離目的是爲了強調老師作爲權威人物的角色。這一點很重要，這樣教師纔可以強化紀律，保障教學，也可以得到學生的尊重。老師和學生保持一種正式的距離的另外一個原因就是避免事實上的或者感覺上的偏見。如果老師和學生關係很緊密，評分時做到沒有偏見是很苦難的。甚至會讓一些學生感到他們收到了不公平的待遇。
總之，在師生之間保持一定的距離既可以保證課堂的權威性又能避免事實上和感覺上的偏見。
【範文解析】
這次的四級作文再次考了和大學生生活極爲緊密的話題——如何妥善處理師生關係，這是每個大學生都會面臨的問題。構思本題可以從以下思路入手，首先開篇從所有的人類關係引出師生關係，並明確給出主題，也就是師生間的關係要保持一定的距離；中間段落具體闡述師生之間保持一定距離的原因；結尾段進行總結。