一次有趣的生日聚會 An Interesting Birthday Party

It was October 12th yesterday. My friends held a birthday party for me. In the morning, they came to my home early, and they brought many presents for me. I liked them very much. I invited them to the KTV, we sang songs, danced and played games. About 5:30 p.m., we went my home. My mother had cooked a delicious dinner for us. After dinner, we watched TV and at about 8:30 p.m. we ate birthday cake.  There were fifteen candles on my birthday cake. I made a silent wish, and then I blew the candles out in one breath. I had an interesting birthday party. We had a good time in the party. I was so grateful to what they did for me.

昨天是10月12日，我朋友給我舉辦了一個生日聚會。早上，他們早早就來到我家，而且給我買了很多禮物。我很喜歡它們。我邀請他們去KTV唱歌，我們唱歌，跳舞和玩遊戲。大約5點半的樣子我們就回家了。我媽媽給我們煮了一頓可口的晚餐。吃完晚飯，我們就看電視，大約晚上8點半的樣子我們就吃生日蛋糕。我的生日蛋糕有15根蠟燭。我許了一個願，然後一口氣吹滅蠟燭。我度過了一個有趣的生日聚會，聚會上我們玩的很開心。我很感激他們爲我做的一切。