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英语高考作文之如何遣词造句

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英语高考作文之如何遣词造句

  英语高考作文之如何遣词造句(一)

1.用词准确,得体

写作中每个词汇的选取都要符合语言环境的要求。其中,动词最为重要。

(1)我把钥匙忘在车里了。

A:I forgot my keys in the car.(F)

B:I left my keys in the car.(T)

(2)我的梦想实现了。

A:My dream has become true.(F)

B:My dream has come true.(T)

2.选词多样

写作中要恰当得体地使用高中学习的较为高级一些的词汇。

(1)我几乎睁不开眼睛。

A:I can not open my eyes.(一般)

B:I can hardly keep my eyes open.(优秀)

(2)他是个新手。

A:He is a new one.(一般)

B:He is a green hand.(优秀)

3.短语优先

多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。

(1)我再也不能忍受他跟我说话的方式了。

A:I can no longer bear the way he speaks to me.(一般)

B:I can no longer put up with the way he speaks to me.(优秀)

(2)他对我在课堂上所说的置若罔闻。

A:He didn't listen to what I said in the class.(一般)

B:He turned a deaf ear to what I said in the class.(优秀)

4.避免重复

尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词,必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。

(1)我喜欢读书而我的兄弟则喜欢看足球赛。

A:I like reading while my brother likes watching foot­ball matches.(一般)

B:I like reading while my brother enjoys watching foot­ball matches.(优秀)

(2)杰克是我们学校的学生。他学习特别努力。

A:Jack studies in our studies very hard.(一般)

B:Jack studies in our works hard at his lessons.(优秀)

  英语高考作文之如何遣词造句(二)

1.改变句子开头的方式。

可以适当地把一些成分(如状语)提前,放在句子的开头,这样使整个句子读起来跌宕起伏,增加书面表达的表现力。

(1)我今天早晨收到了你十月十八日的来信。

A:I received your letter which was written on October 18th this Morning.(一般)

B:Your letter of October 18th reached me this morning.(优秀)

(2)那个房子既黑暗又空荡,跟我记得的形式不同。

A:The house was dark and it looked very different from the way I remembered it.(一般)

B:Dark and empty,the house looked very different from the way I remembered it.(优秀)

2.使用一些表达感情的句式,如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力。

(1)那是一部有趣的电影。

A:It is an interesting film.(一般)

B:What an interesting film it is!(优秀)

C:How interesting a film it is!(优秀)

(2)只是当他回来时我们才查明了真相。

A:We found out the truth when he returned.(一般)

B:We didn't find out the truth until he returned.(优秀)

C:Only when he returned did we find out the truth.(优秀)

3.句式多样,复杂得体。

在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句式,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、并列句与复合句共用;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格结构、分词结构等也可使用。

(1)他的父亲是否能痊愈还是个问题。他为此非常焦虑不安。

A:He doesn't know whether his father will recover,so he is very upset.(一般)

B:Whether his father will recover is still a he is very upset.(简单句与复合句共用)(优秀)

(2)你每天帮我学英语。你太好了!

A:You help me study English every are very kind.(一般)

B:It's very kind of you to help me learn English every day.(优秀)

C:How kind of you to help me learn English every day!(优秀)

  练习

1. 选择适当的单词填空

't read ________ the sunlight.(in/under)

has a ________ body temperature.(high/hot)

lives ________ and often feels ________.(alone/lonely)

4.I think the patient will get ________ soon.(good/well)

________Christmas with a tree and many presents.(congratulate/celebrate)

  2. 一句多译

1.妈妈匆匆忙忙上班去了,连早饭都没吃。

Mother went to work hurrily;she didn't have breakfast.

=Mother went to work ____________ didn't have breakfast.

=Mother went to work in a hurry ____________ breakfast.

2.我宁愿呆在家里也不愿去看电影。

I prefer ____________ at home rather than ____________ the film.

=I prefer ____________ at home to ____________ the film.

=I would rather ________ at home than go to see the film.

3.我们到达农场时,受到了农民的热烈欢迎。

When we got to the farm,we were given a warm welcome by the farmers.

=When__________ the farm,we__________a warm welcome from the farmers.

=On________________,wewere ________________ by the farmers.

  3. 句型转换

walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(使用过去分词)

=___________________________________________________________.

2.I won't believe what he says.(使用状语从句)

=___________________________________________________________.

had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.(使用倒装句改写)

=___________________________________________________________.