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比較級題型在託福寫作中的運用

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在托福考試中有個比較詞就是我們再熟悉不過的“than”對於這類題型成爲比較級,那麼在託福寫作中運用比較級呢,一起跟着小編了解一下具體情況。

比較級題型在託福寫作中的運用

比較級題型在託福寫作中的運用

根據往年的題型,我們把託福寫作題型中有比較詞“than” 的題型稱之爲比較級題型,如下面題型所示:

It is more important for a teacher to help students gain self-confidence than to teach specific knowledge.(對於老師來說,幫助學生建立自信心比教授具體知識更加重要。)

It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics.(對於學生來說,學習歷史和文學比學習科學和數學更加重要。)

Physical exercise is more important for older people than younger people.(體育鍛煉對老年人來說比對年輕人更重要。)

Good looks and clothing are more important for success than good ideas.(要想獲得成功,漂亮的長相和着裝比好的思想更重要。)

Relating well with other people is more important to future career success than studying hard at school.(對未來職業成功發展來說,與他人搞好關係比在學校努力學習更重要。)

那麼針對這類題型我們如何進行寫作呢?下面我們以具體題型爲例進行分析:

It is more important for a teacher to help students gain self-confidence than to teach specific knowledge.(對於老師來說,幫助學生建立自信心比教授具體知識更加重要。)

首先,我們可以採用一邊倒結構,它適用於一般的託福作文。它通常是選擇題目中的一個方面,進行贊同或反對論證。

如:

A1>B1;

A2>B2;

A3>B3;

也就是說,

開頭段:引言(表明觀點)

第二段:贊同理由之一

第三段:贊同理由之二

第四段:贊同理由之三

結尾段:結論(呼應開頭段)

或者,

B1>A1;

B2>A2;

B3>A3;

開頭段:引言(表明觀點)

第二段:反對理由之一

第三段:反對理由之二

第四段:反對理由之三

結尾段:結論(呼應開頭段)

再或者

A1>B1

A2>B2

B strength /A weakness

開頭段:引言(表明觀點)

第二段:贊同理由之一

第三段:贊同理由之二

第四段:雖然B strength(to teach specific knowledge也有優勢),或者A weakness(只是幫助學生獲得自信也有不足之處),但是總的來說,我認爲A>B。

結尾段:結論(呼應開頭段)

下面我們以這道題爲例,具體操作一下:

1. For primary school students especially those who introverts, gaining self-confidence is more important than specific knowledge:(對於小學生來說,尤其是那些性格內向的小學生,建立自信比學習具體知識更重要):

第二段:理由一:enables them to obtain surprising achievements in game. The movie: Facing Giants. Without self-confidence, students wouldn’t have courage to face challenges in study.(建立自信可以幫助孩子在比賽中取得超常的成績。如電影“面對巨人”。沒有自信,學生就沒有勇氣克服學習中遇到的困難和挑戰。如果建立自信,他/她也會更加努力地學習具體知識。)

第三段:理由二:better performance at school. A study by the University of Texas showed that students who received some expression of confidence in their ability—even while receiving criticism—performed better later on than those who were simply told to aim for higher standards.(在學校中獲得更好的表現。得克薩斯大學的一項研究表明,如果學生能夠得到對他們能力自信的表達,即便同時也收到了批評,他們的表現也會比那些只是被告知要定睛於更高標準的學生更優秀。)

第四段:雖然教授學生具體知識也非常重要,但是,從教育本身的目的來說,我個人認爲建立自信更加重要。

託福寫作:教你搞定“非主流”題型

三選一與問題分析類題型

【三選一】作爲託福獨立寫作中的一類常見題,通常會基於某個話題給出三個選項,讓童鞋們挑選其中一個認爲最好的進行展開討論,例如:

Which way do you think is the best for a student to make friends?

Join a sports team,participate in community activities or travel?

每當托福考生遇到這樣的題目,內心一定是崩潰的,一方面因爲我們寫慣了二選一比較級類型題,思路是比較模式化的,然而對於三選一題目準備並不充分,導致考場思路嚴重短路。

【問題分析類】是比較罕見的一類題型,但考試碰見這類題型,還是比較蒙圈的,通常是給出一個問題,讓童鞋們分析論證。

如何搞定寫作難題?

三選一與問題分析類題目作爲獨立寫作偏議論文的文體,考生需要在一定時間內自圓其說地表明自己的立場,並給出相應的論證說理和事實舉例。

三選一,到底選哪個?

對於有“糾結症”的童鞋,三選一寫作就有些困難了,三個選項看起來都好有道理的樣子,如何才能表明自己的立場呢?這時候,你就需要知道考官想要你選哪個,去“迎合”考官的口味!

託福寫作十種高分句式

(一)、否定句

1、Instead of indulging in playing computer games, children should be taught how to benefit from useful information on the internet. 應該教孩子們如何從互聯網獲取有益的信息,而不是沉溺於玩電腦遊戲。

2、On no account (Under no circumstances)can we ignore the immense value of knowledge. 我們絕不能忽視知識的巨大價值。

3、College students take part-time jobs not for more money but for a better understanding of societies. 大學生參加兼職工作不是爲了賺更多錢,而是爲了更好地瞭解社會。

4、One’s salary does not depend so much on his educational background as on his ability and contribution to the society. 一個人的工資與其說取決於他的教育背景倒不如說取決於他的能力和對社會的貢獻。

5、In terms of nutrition, fast food is far from satisfactory. 從營養角度來說,快餐遠非令人滿意。

6、Parents would not expect their children to become useful persons without working hard. 父母們不能指望孩子們不經過刻苦努力就可以成才。

(二)、非限制性定語從句

1、Undoubtedly, practical courses can be used to the reality, which is of vital importance to their development in the future. 毫無疑問,實用性課程可以用於實際中,這對於他們未來發展是非常重要的。 2、Children tend to imitate what they have seen and heard on mass media, which is sometimes dangerous and harmful. 孩子們傾向於模仿大衆媒體上的所見所聞,這在有時是危險和有害的。 3、The majority of students believe that part-time jobs will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets. 大部分學生相信業餘工作會使他們有更多機會發展人際交往能力, 這對他們未來找工作是非常有好處的.

(三)、讓步句

1、This view is widely acknowledged;however,there is little evidence that smoking is beneficial to people’s health. 這個觀點被廣泛認可,然而,幾乎沒有證據表明吸菸對人們健康有利。

2、Although(While) the computer has been widely used in class, it cannot replace the role of teachers. 儘管計算機已經廣泛用於課堂,但是它不能取代教師的作用。 3、Reasonable as the opinion sounds, it cannot bear much analysis. 雖然這個觀點聽起來有道理,但是它經不住分析 4、In spite of a lot of conveniences that cars bring to people’s life, they can create a series of serious problems. 儘管汽車給人們的生活帶來了許多便利,但是也產生了一系列嚴重的問題。

(四)、It引導的句子

1、It is hard to imagine what our life would look like without computers in modern society. 很難想象如果現代社會沒有了計算機,我們的生活會變成什麼樣子。

2、It is conceivable that being physically active does good to health. 可想而知,積極參加體育活動有利於身體健康。

3、It is a highly controversial issue whether women should join the armed forces or not. 女性是否應該參軍是一個非常有爭議的問題。

4、It is universally acknowledged that water and air are indispensable to human beings. 人們普遍認爲,水和空氣對人類不可缺少。

5、It is essential that endangered species of animals be protected against being killed. 保護瀕危的動物物種免遭殘殺是必需的。

6、It is high time that the government took effective measures to resolve these problems. 該是政府採取有效措施來解決這些問題的時候了。

7、It has been made easier for modern people to communicate with each other by the internet in a few seconds. 現代人很容易通過互聯網在幾秒鐘內就取得聯繫。

8、It is worth caring about the way a child behaves. 關心孩子們的行爲方式是值得的。

9、It is no use crying over the spilt milk. 覆水難收。

10、It has been a few decades since the computer came into being. 自從計算機問世以來已經有幾十年的時間了。

(五)、假設句

1、If we destroy old buildings, then we will ruin the traditional culture and heritage. 如果我們推倒老房子,就要破壞傳統的文化和遺產。

2、You would miss the chance to interact with other students if you used internet at home. 假如你在家上網,你就會失去與其他同學交流的機會。

3、Once you change your present job, you will be faced with the danger of being unemployed. 一旦你變換了現在的工作,就面臨着失業的危險。

(六)、倒裝句

1、Only in this way can the problem be tackled properly. 只有這樣才能妥善地解決這個問題。

2、Only when children take arduous efforts can they become successful. 只有當孩子們付出艱苦的努力他們才能獲得成功。

3、Not only does studying in school serve academic purpose, but students learn how to handle interpersonal relations. 在校學習不僅爲了學術目的,而且還可以學會如何處理人際關係。

4、Under no circumstances should youngsters follow negative information on mass media blindly. 青少年決不應當盲從大衆媒體上的不良信息。

5、So valuable is water that we cannot afford to waste it. 時間是如此珍貴,我們經不起浪費它。

6、Nowadays, most dangerous for youngsters is the tendency to indulge in playing PC games. 如今對青少年最爲危險的事情是傾向於過多地玩電腦遊戲。

(七)、強調句

1、It is for the benefit of maintaining the ecological balance that human beings ought to protect the endangered animal species.正是爲了維持生態平衡,人類才應該保護地球上瀕危的動物物種。

2、It is not until people suffer from some fatal diseases such as SARS and AIDS that they are becoming aware of how significant it is for the government to invest more money in medical care. 直到人們患了像非典和愛滋病這樣致命的疾病時,才意識到政府把更多的錢投入到醫療上的重要性。

3、Nothing in the world is more valuable than health.

(八)、比較句

1、Studies show that juvenile delinquency rates are twice as high for youngsters from single-parent families as for those in traditional households. (同級比較)研究表明來自單親家庭的青少年犯罪率是來自傳統家庭的兩倍。

2、Generally speaking, people in modern times enjoy less leisure time than they did previously. (比較級)一般說來,現代人比過去享有更少的休閒時間。

3、Compared with those with different abilities, children with intelligence do more well in their school work and intelligence tests. 與不同能力的孩子相比,聰明的孩子在學業和智力測驗方面表現更加突出。

4、Contrary to pop stars, other professionals like doctors and teachers create the true value for their society. 與明星不同,其他專業人員如醫生和教師爲社會創造了真正的價值。

5、Air is to human what (as) water is to fish. 空氣對人類就如同水對魚一樣。

(九)、插入語

1、Computers, most important of all, create wide communication around the world. 最重要的是,計算機在世界範圍內建立了廣泛的交流。

2、Providing more parking areas, in the long run, has proved to be a practical way out in many large cities in the world. 從長遠的利益來看,提供更多的停車位被證實是許多世界大城市切實可行的出路。

3、Observing local culture, consciously and unconsciously, can reduce the chance of offending the locals, or it will lead to the embarrassment and even conflict. 無論是否意識到,遵循當地的文化可以減少冒犯當地人的機會,否則,就會導致尷尬甚至衝突。

4、Space exploration, some people believe, will bring some unexpected discoveries. 有人相信空間探索將會帶來意想不到的發現。

(十)、原因句

1、Violent films can do harm to young people, because they contains numerous negative information. 暴力影片對年輕人是有害的,因爲其中包含大量負面信息。

2、Human beings are chiefly responsible for wild animal extinction. 野生動物滅絕的主要責任在人類。

3、We should attribute (ascribe)medical advances to the animals which do substantial contributions to the experiment. 我們應該把醫學的發展歸因於動物對實驗做出的巨大貢獻。

4、Because of overpopulation, water shortage has become one of the most serious problems. 由於人口過剩,水短缺已經成爲一個最嚴重的問題。

5、Owing to the fierce competition in today’s world, a great many young people find themselves under great pressure. 由於當今世界的激烈競爭,大量的年輕人承受巨大的壓力。