不錯的幾篇高考滿分作文

Dear Bob,
　　Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.
　　I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.
　　Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, 　　see you.
　　Best wishes !
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Yours,
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Li Hua
滿分理由

本文格式正確，內容完整，表述清楚，銜接緊密流暢，時態語態使用準確，特別是結尾末段適度的發揮，既充實了內容，又符合邏輯，成爲本文與衆不同的亮點。
 Dear Bob,
　　How are you these days?
　　I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.
　　There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Yours,
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Li Hua
滿分理由

本文內在邏輯性很強，由遠及近。由外及內，層次分明，錯落有致。同時讓步狀語從句運用得恰到好處，很出彩，再則結構完整，從開頭的問候語到結尾都很完備。