雅思寫作語法的易錯點
詞彙和語法是構成一個句子的兩個基本要素。但是大多數考生都會存在一個誤區:就是過分注重詞彙,追求所謂高分詞彙。但如果文章中存在大量的語法錯誤,就會讓考官感到是在讀一個語法錯誤百出用詞卻極爲高深的畸形文章。這種語法的基本功和用詞的難度之間不搭配的情況存在與很多學生的文章裏。
雅思寫作語法的易錯點
第一易錯點:
Government claims that teacher should teach student some self-protection skills.
錯誤分析:可數名詞不可“裸用”。
在正式英文寫作裏,凡是常規的可數名詞,必須在前面有限定詞,比如冠詞a/an/the,物主代詞my/their/your等等,指示代詞this/that等等。否則,這個可數名詞就必須用複數。而在這個句子中government要麼用the government,要麼用government,後面的teacher和student都一樣要加上覆數。
因此,這個句子要改成:The government claims that teachers should teach students some self-protection skills.
第二易錯點:
Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency.
錯誤分析:英語中動詞原形是不能作主語的,而且在這個句子中如果work做了動詞,後面can enhance也是動詞,就出現雙謂語的情況,因此把work改成working.
因此,這個句子要改成:Working at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency.
第三易錯點:
Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers.
錯誤分析:詞性使用錯誤。
different的詞性爲形容詞,而修飾形容詞或者動詞的時候應該用副詞。
因此,這個句子要改成:Intelligent students should not be treated differently by their teachers.
第四易錯點:
A lot of houses were collapsed in the earthquake.
錯誤分析:句中出現雙謂語。
句中collapse已經爲動詞,再加be動詞之後就變成了被動結構,此處be純屬多餘。
因此,這個句子要改成:A lot of houses collapsed in the earthquake.
第五易錯點:
Some parents do not obey traffic rules himself.
錯誤分析:當我們用到代詞的時候,就一定要看所指代的名詞的單複數,根據名詞的單複數來使用相應的代詞。
因此,這個句子要改成:Some parents do not obey traffic rules themselves.
第六易錯點:
Letters were the most important way of communication in the past , e-mail becomes its biggest rival now.
錯誤分析:這個句子的句型並不屬於簡單句、並列句、或者複合句中的任何一種的定義。因爲出現了兩套動詞,因此我們可以將這個句子變成並列句,而前後兩句之間是對比關係,所以我們可以在中間加對比連詞或副詞,比如while。
因此,這個句子要改成:Letters were the most important way of communication in the past while now e-mail becomes its biggest rival now.
第七易錯點:
There are a great deal of people go abroad every year.
錯誤分析:當我們用到there be句型的時候,後面不能再出現動詞原形。因此要將go變換形式,改爲going,或者將句子轉換爲定語從句,在people後面加上who。
因此,這個句子要改成:There are a great deal of people going abroad every year. 或There are a great deal of people who go abroad every year.
以上是在寫作中常出現的語法錯誤,如果學生能夠注意以上七種錯誤,就離高分又前進了一步。