大學英語四六級考試作文閃光點

在英語四六級考試中，作文是得分率最低的題型之一，很多同學在備考的時候都掌握了一定的作文模板，和基本的語法、詞彙、句型用法之後，如果能夠將作文中創造一些詞彙和句型的閃光點，將使得文章更加漂亮。今天我們就爲大家整理了大學英語四六級考試作文閃光點，希望可以幫助到大家。

高分作文標誌:

1：是否長短句交叉;2、是否會使用插入語;3、用詞是否多樣，準確，形象，儘量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞; 4、關鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重複詞; 5、句型使用是否準確、地道。

下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項：

1. 適當用被動替換主動，這樣能更客觀的反映事實, 句子開頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫結尾時不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 舉個經典結尾2004年六月六級作文的最後一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.

2. 善於使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞後，兩邊分別加上逗號。

如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間，一般放在動詞，助動詞後，兩邊分別加上逗號。

比如說： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …

3. 一定要學會換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現good, bad , many, thing, think,

people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替換proper, approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替換enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競爭力)

下面舉一篇南京工程學院某位同學寫的優秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何運用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

Computer and I ( By Simmy )

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.

exceedingly 替換 very

thrilling 替換 exciting

sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb. be interested in sth.

google 替換 search

an army of 替換 a lot of

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個精彩句型，用來描述在某個時期發生了什麼事情; Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular

Coincident with … 非常地道的句型，表達“與…一致”的意思，替換 With …

Advancement 替換 development

Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替換 enter into

Current ( currently )替換 now

Appeal to sb. 替換 sb. be interested in sth.

Growing individuals 替換 more and more people

It is no exaggeration to say 經典句型， 說某事是毫不誇張的 滬江四六級

For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.

For a start 替換 To begin with

We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法

our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被動

Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides

Deliver 替換 send

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures,

AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個句子有三個精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個句型，還有however作爲插入語， function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to

Emerging 替換 appearing ( fading 替換 disappearing )

Net citizen 網民，屬於精彩用詞

As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people’ lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.

No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides

Computers do play ，do 強調

Positive 替換 important / good 等

A slice of 替換 a part of

Unfavorable 替換 bad

Impacts 替換 effects / influences

We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入語

Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替換 advantage ( defects 替換 disadvantage ) Facet 替換 aspect

以下是30個最經典的替換詞，各位同學可以參考一下:

1.individuals,characters, folks替換(people ,persons)

2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising

(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替換good

3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替換bad

如果bad做表語，可以有be less impressive替換

eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive. 滬江四六級

4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替換many.

注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many後一定要有詞。

Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理 用most, if not all ,替換most.

5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替換some

6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,

hold the view that, it is widely shared that,

it is universally acknowledged that)替think

(因爲是書面語，所以要加that)

7:affair ,business ,matter 替換thing

8: shared 代 common

9.reap huge fruits 替換get many benefits )

10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替換 in my opinion

11:Increasing(ly),growing 替換more and more( 注意沒有growingly這種形式。所以當修飾名詞時用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞，副詞用increasingly.

Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.

Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.

12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替換hardly

13..beneficial, rewarding替換helpful,

14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替換customer

15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替換very

16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable ... 替換 unnecessary, avoidable

17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替換sb take interest in / sb. be interested in

18.capture one’s attention替換attract one’s attention.滬

19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect

20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear

21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替換cause.

22. There are several reasons behind sth 替換..reasons for sth

23.desire 替換want.

24.pour attention into 替換pay attention to

25.bear in mind that 替換remember

26. enjoy, possess 替換have(注意process是過程的意思)

27. interaction替換communication

28.frown on sth替換 be against , disagree with sth

29.to name only a few, as an example替換 for example, for instance

30. next to / virtually impossible,替換nearly / almost impossible

以上就是爲大家整理的大學英語四六級考試作文閃光點，四六級考試中，作文的成績普遍低下，但是想要在寫作中取得好的成績，就必須要有閃光點，希望本篇文章的介紹可以幫助到大家。